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Love Story – Valentines Special

She came but she’s gone

 

I was 10 and 2 years old, when I first felt this indescribable feeling, she was the only sweet, cute and intelligent girl I knew. We both went to the same school, and of course I always wait for her during class dismissal. We enjoyed our life as simply as we can be. She lived in an exclusive village while I had my home beside their place, a squatter area so to speak. But even though they had all the richness I think of, her parents are so caring and lovable towards me. I just wonder, is it because they don’t have a baby boy in the family? Well, I just don’t know.

 

We only have a week to go before graduation day. But, I am still speechless in regards with my feeling to the girl whom I believed I fell with, a puppy love? Maybe. One afternoon, after our commencement practice, she proudly delivered the news to me,

“BF, I will be going to a private school for my high school. How about you?”

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February 9, 2008 - Posted by | happenings, personal, valentines, Writeups

11 Comments »

  1. waaaaaaa T_T nakakaiyak naman sino kaya un??? ikaw un at siya?… aminin!!!

    Comment by Aice Nice Concepts | February 9, 2008 | Reply

  2. Nice story. I read this thrice.

    Comment by batang buotan | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  3. “Destiny determines who comes along our way, but our hearts determines who will stay, forever inside” Cherished her forever in your heart, but don’t be blind so much of the past, the present offers you a beautiful love story more than you ever felt before… Nice lovestory….

    Comment by Lovely | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  4. i was really touched by ur story…as i read along tears run down frm mah eyes..it reaally is true love…how i wish i could find one like u!!hahaha!!superb mr.writer..keep it up…

    Comment by chareez | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  5. naks! i feel like i’m watching a tragic drama.. i’m touched. bai, ikaw na jud ingon makarelate ka.. nice one! =]

    Comment by michael | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  6. naks! i feel like i’m watching a tragic drama.. bai, ikaw na gaingon nga makarelate ka.. haha.. nice one..

    Comment by michael | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  7. TANOM
    NOMTA
    MONTA

    mark?????
    monta????

    r u d writer?
    r u d narrator?
    r u the boy:?

    well…wat a sad story…
    so,so,sad….

    pero the man s still young para wla nlng juy i-love…21 pa kaha…

    (“,)

    Comment by sOLmyRa | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  8. ay…wla jud koy browse3x dah…ikaw diay ang owber ani..hehehhe

    sorry5x!

    heheh..

    nice job maRk!

    (“,)

    Comment by sOLmyRa | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  9. mArk…moRe plEase……

    more love stories…..
    hehehehe….

    mobasa jud ko….hehehe…

    (‘,)

    Comment by sOLmyRa | February 12, 2008 | Reply

  10. na repost ko na po sa Aice Nice Concepts ko na blog

    Comment by Aice Nice Concepts | February 13, 2008 | Reply

  11. *claps* bai nindot jud xa.

    padayun lang sa imo works.
    thumbs up!

    Comment by Junlee | February 14, 2008 | Reply


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